Tuesday, 7 February 2012
Except
I know not when, nor where, nor why,
Except that I love you.
The reason for heart racing, veins pulsing,
Eyes watering, membranes bleeding,
Brain freezing, lips trembling,
Skin goose-pimpling, feet tripping,
Is you.
Roses have no beauty,
Water quenches no thirst,
There is no air; no breath,
Nothing abounds and excitement is dead,
Unless there’s you.
The sweetest sonnet is written by the daft,
Music is made of a single shattering treble,
Juicy kisses are meaningless,
The taste of me is sour,
Until you come along.
The earth is dry,
Food is bitter,
The sun doesn’t shine,
All is waste,
Except that I love you.
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awwwwwwwwww..... this is sweet! <3 LOVE!
ReplyDeleteThanks Robert! :)
Deletehmmmmmmmmm.... I was missing a love poem, and this is just exquisite!!! Great write Fayola
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it! :)
DeleteA lovely write...that what love is all about :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ayala!
Deletethis is a wonderful poem about love...and once you have it...the world could end and be just like that but if you got love its going to mbe all right...it will really mess you up wont it...ha
ReplyDeleteIt really does doesn't it?! lol
DeleteYou've played with what one would expect in a poem of love, but you have presented the images and tokens in a voice that is unique and original. This is NOT just another love poem...this is awesome!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Natasha!
DeleteWhat Tash said!
ReplyDeleteThis site needs a like button for comments lol1 Thanks again Robert!
DeleteYou had me at the first 2 lines! Love it =)
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you liked it!
Deleteyour expression of the reliance of love in this is well penned, ~ Rose
ReplyDeleteThanks Rose!
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